Picture above is my first draft. Comment on this story is,
"too laggy"
" phone call interaction seems not the main one"
" dont see why i need that phone call interaction "
" its okay to use this but if can, come out with another one. try to flash back once in a while to tell the story.. others focus on escaping"
So i worked again and come out with second draft
Here comes my second draft..!!! but still need to change..cause too much of flash back also ..
plus phone call..i need to set some story so that the patoganistis being restricted to call the user oni..
if she has choice, probably she will like calling 999 instead of random people. hahaha.
its true alsoo.. :)
Here comes my second draft..!!! but still need to change..cause too much of flash back also ..
plus phone call..i need to set some story so that the patoganistis being restricted to call the user oni..
if she has choice, probably she will like calling 999 instead of random people. hahaha.
its true alsoo.. :)
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